Suggestions for a sketch?

I was thinking of doing another little sketch story.  So, having said that, give me suggestions and if I like it, I’ll do it.  Give as much or as little detail as you like but just realize that sketch stories average around 4k words and are not typically very detailed.  Bonus points for something I haven’t done yet (whether an animal I haven’t tried to do a TF for or etc.)…

The Pact

Set against the backdrop of 1873, a young man learns the dangers of asking for your hearts desires.  For some forces and dark and enjoy the folly that follows such requests.  The young man’s wish comes with a heavy price that not only he must pay.

A single bead of sweat crept from beneath the band of Little Joe’s hat, burrowing through caked-on dirt until it worked itself down into a muddy afterthought.  The young man rubbed the back of his grimy hand against his cheek, smearing the streak and wiping away bits of dry earth.  He squinted up at the sun while he pushed the heavy plough behind the family’s old, tired draft horse. 

Sketches & Status!

I hope everyone is enjoying the sketches.  I like how the model is working and how it allows me to just write something simple.  I get to test out different things, see how they work and etc… without worrying about polishing the story up to standard quality.  All good.

I am, however, now working on The Pact again and I hope to have it finished by tomorrow evening.  I’m at 5,500 words and I figure it’ll be 8,000 to 10,000 when I’m done.…

Sketch 03: Temptation

My first attempt at a bimbofication story with BE (breast enlargment).  Because, why not?  A young woman falls victim to temptation.

Tracy stood beside her small booth and watched as her classmates walked by.  Most of the other students ignored her but a few looked at her signs and laughed before walking away.

“Abstinence is the only answer,” the small girl said to no one in particular.  “We need to value our bodies and save ourselves for our husbands and wives.  Join the pledge to save yourselves for marriage.  I have shirts and promise bracelets so you can show your support for-”

A young freshman couple stopped in front of her booth and Tracy smiled at them. …

Sketch 02: Cat Toy

Gods are fickle things.  Fickle and numerous and given to flights of fancy.  Or, sometimes, fits of jealousy.  And then, rarely, a god will take interest in our world long enough to assert his or her or its influence on events.  Demons fear when a god looks askance at their doings and humans are frail things in comparison.

Frail and pliable things.

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Sandy scanned her computer’s monitor as her onscreen character huffed and chuffed, claws at the ready.  Bodies lay strewn around her character’s form and the semi-pixelated werewolf seemed to look for its own prey as Sandy moved it around the computer generated world. …

Modifying Existing Stories – A Question

So, I’m curious.  Is it an annoyance when someone modifies an existing story?  I’m very much guilty of this but I’d thought with Testing Grounds that I’d done a better job of not rushing the whole thing.  It seems like it was really, really well received but most of the comments were along the lines of “Awesome… I just wish XXXX part was drawn out a bit more…”

So, should I go back and modify it?  I’d originally worried that I was already dragging the story on and I left some things out just so it wouldn’t become dull.  Is that not the case?  

Sketch Part 1: Mother

This is part one of the “sketch” series.  Rough draft little stories put together quickly.  In this one, a man and woman are test subjects.  One changing from man to woman, the other changing into a werewolf.

My head hurts.  Badly.

And I’m cold.

My eyes crack open and the headache flares as the overhead lights drill deep into my skull.

I can’t remember where I am.  I left work.  I remember that.  Night time.  Damn project due for presentation tomorrow to our clients and they changed their RFP the day before.  I was walking home and… and… and what?  I can’t remember.…

Holidays

I’m giving myself a little break due to the holidays.  I’ve posted… what?  Seven stories in two months with Layers Chapter 10 and Testing Grounds Chapter 1 being heavyweights so I’m every so slightly worn out.

I think next I will finish The Pact to get it off my plate.  And then I’ll decide what to do after that.  I have (sigh) three ongoing stories in play and several ideas for stories outside of those.  Interesting to note that the three series are in three separate and distinct categories – Horror (The Lady Wore Red), Fantasy (Sacrifice) and Science Fiction (Testing Grounds).  …

Testing Grounds – Literotica Variant

Sooo… apparently bestiality is a no-no on Literotica.  I’ve modified the story to mostly remove that part and hopefully it still makes sense.  If anyone cares to read it, I’m also included the modified chapter here.

May 23rd, 2057 11:24 am PST

Like a spy cloaked against its enemies, three small spiked shapes danced unnoticed by the neighboring cells floating in the culture dish.  Dimmed light from the monitor lit Dr. Campbell’s face while he watched the movement of the magnified sample.  Computers hummed in the darkened room, providing power to the algorithms that automatically tracked and recorded the specimens.

Dr.…

Testing Grounds – Chapter 1

Set in a near-future science-fiction story, a doctor makes a breakthrough in gene therapy that has world-changing applications.  Away from prying eyes, he tests his discovery on an unsuspecting young woman and documents her changes.

 

May 23rd, 2057 11:24 am PST

Like a spy cloaked against its enemies, three small spiked shapes danced unnoticed by the neighboring cells floating in the culture dish.  Dimmed light from the monitor lit Dr. Campbell’s face while he watched the movement of the magnified sample.  Computers hummed in the darkened room, providing power to the algorithms that automatically tracked and recorded the specimens.

Dr.…